In week 4 in writing we had to finish our story from last week and this is my story is about a elf who loses her family in a plane crash, after the most shy pixie comes and asks her if she wants her......... you should read the story your self for now no more spoilers. After you read my story tell me in the comments if you like it or if I should change something so I can improve my next story.
Friendship story by Me
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Saturday, May 9, 2020
Monday, May 4, 2020
Reading week 4
This week the book I'm reading is called Grandpas Great Escape by David Walliams its a very interesting book so you should read it to understand what i'm talking about, so today I chose to do word art I included things that happen through the story is about jack and his grandpa they love planes so that's why he was in the WWll jack would loved to have gone to the WWll but he was not even born so there was no chance. Hope you like my post, tell me what you think I could have done better in today's blog post
Friday, May 1, 2020
Writing - Narrative
This week Mr Mitchell gave us a task to do it was about how to make a Narrative writing I done everything we had to do this week I'm not going to put the whole slide because it will spoil my story when I post the finished product so these are the characters of my fantasy story it was fun and easy because I wrote everything that came to my mind and I think my story will be pretty good when finished so keep an eye out for that. Tell me what you think about my characters.
Wednesday, April 8, 2020
Poetic Writing
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