Hi
This week we have been learning how to write persuasive texts, our teacher gave us topics for us to write about I chose one about animals, it isn't really good but I tried it took a long time though but it was pretty fun because I had to think a lot about it
I strongly believe that animals shouldn't be kept in a zoo. Animals need natural habitat, family and to be able to fend for themselves.
Firstly, animals are taken from their natural habitat to be put in a cage until their last days, people shouldn't pay to see an animal being treated badly.
Additionally, they should not get stolen from their parents at any stage of their life, they are born in the wild with their family, they shouldn't steal them form their family.
Finally, when in a zoo animals can't fend for themselves, as in the wild when they're young they learn from their mothers.
In conclusion animals shouldn't be kept in a zoo, because they are not in their habitat, and are taken from their family, and they're not able to fend for themselves.
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